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I just edited this because of the grammar.. I meant it to be in the third person.. Got jumbled-up perhaps because I so wanted it to be in the first..

 

This is the final version:

 

The Kiss..

 

...After talking for hours over dinner, still talking after dinner while walking on the beach and feeling dangerously sexy for the evening or early hours of the morning..

 

In a comfortable, cozy place, dim light, mood music.. Flowers.. Scented candles.. (Or the bedroom will do nicely, thank you..)

 

We start out slow.. Stare at each others eyes.. Anticipating.. Knowing..

 

Small nibbles.. Lips hardly touching.. Eyes closed now.. Feeling the breath before getting tickled by the the soft tips of each others lips.. Measuring or feeling each other out like boxers dancing around the ring before the brawl..

 

Now start opening the lips a bit.. Turning or tilting our heads to one side to be more positioned to catch each other's kiss..

 

Plant a very soft and gentle full kiss but without pressure.. Just a planted, sort of tasting kiss with the slightest of tongue and suction in the end..

 

Add a little more pressure.. Tasting more.. A little more tongue with just a hint of wetness.. Repeating what you started up to this point for several cycles..

 

By this time both of us should be slightly out of breath.. Sweet smelling breath of white wine or fruits give a more heady feeling and add to the intensity of the moment.. The textures, the scents highlighting the sensation of the kiss..

 

Then I hold your face gently.. Caressing your cheeks, brushing your neck and nape softly with my touch.. Hand going up your hair from behind, gently stroking with the tips of my fingers..

 

By this time our kiss becomes firmer.. More urgent.. Though still exploring and a bit hesitant.. Timid and sometimes inquisitive and playful.. Exploring.. Savoring.. Enjoying and taking in every small detail.. Savoring every sensation the energized nerve-endings of the lips can receive and can give..

 

Then that magic moment.. Time stands still.. Nothing else matters.. Both knowing that this is the place we want to be..

 

Our kiss welds our souls together.. It bonds our bodies into an inevitable spiral of intense emotions and the deepest of feelings..

 

Both of us let go.. Let our Kiss bring us to its ultimate desire in a passion burning so hot that we feel like being taken-over by a force so great that we lose control..

 

We give in to the feeling.. Succumb.. Embrace.. Enjoy..

 

For such is the magic of our Love..

 

.. And now it has meaning.. :wub: :wub: :wub:

Edited by robsalvador
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IM NOT STUPID, YOU ARE im not stupid i know what uv been doin i knew after all these years guess u wont change anymore and i just have to bear the never-ending agony this show is killing me cant u just f#&k urself and die coz i wont f#&king care anymore u lil evil lover BUSTED just because she smiles never meant its over just because u think its normal never meant she lives a normal life when the sun is shining so bright look at her boots as their soaked and drenched why did she say good day to u when she's totally insane about the things u still do i say, life is unfair to her but karma is gonna be a bitch to u

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"Confused"

 

Little that i know, so far will it go.

 

Im confused, Im disturbed. Of all the things that i have known, pushes me to keep still and do nothing.

Have you ever felt that you know something but at same time you dont know at all. and you know what?

the most exciting part is the participation of those cute and adorable bunch of lovely ladies. i know. you cant relate

lets leave it that way. Ive known those ladies either from childhood and some back in high. the worst part is...there just plain cute.

anyway freaking weird. ive heard so much just to fall for it...

 

maybe im just inlove with this girl....and only if i can keep this to myself.

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