George Estregan Lives

wow! George Estregan Lives! pisces ka nga. nice haiku! if u can use few words and strong and edit unnecessary words like articles. let the reader imagine what ur haiku means and u did it. u don't need to tell them what it means. pls write more.

 

do u dedicate ur work to the victims of tsunami, too?

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Thank you SunflowR. I really meant to honor pisceans with my haiku (the fate of fishes and all), but reading back, you're right, it really sounded like it was written for the tsunami victims. Thank you for pointing that out.

Thanks for the haiku tips.

And thank you, too, for the kind words. I always thought kind words holds more meaning than any well-crafted verse.

nice idea yan bro sana nga hehehe basta sabihan nio ko ha hehehe

 

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Me too, i'm in. :cool:

Sarap palang mag-haiku. BEar with me because I've one more, this time, in honor of us beautiful Pisceans.

the fish in the sea

gently swims tide’s destiny

till shore tells its fate

I hope this passes for a haiku...

The soft wind whispers

Muted voices from afar

Only the heart hears

Teddy Benigno, except when he becomes too political. No body can beat his mastery of firing up the English language.

Ramon Tulfo also comes in handy, especially when I'm in the toilet suffering from constipation.

BTW, since we are on the topic of Pisceans being writers, I tried my luck once more on poetry yesterday. It's been a while (college days pa) since I gave up on poetry (or it might be, poetry gave up on me), but I hope I still have it. Here goes...

Astrology

You have me spellbound

with stories of satellites,

moons and silent skies.

Everything spoken casts a blanket

That keeps me from the cold sky.

You need not even ask

“What do you feel when you look at the stars?”

For I’ll give you my usual

“I don’t know.”

Every star seems distant,

remote as a faint memory

except for the constant

constellation of your embrace.

Hi J888Cool. Thanks you welcoming us wandering Pisceans. Happy to be part of of this astrological sibling-hood.

BTW, I do not know much about haikus and I keep forgeting the the meter required for it. But this much I know, apart from the rules, a haiku was meant to be written very short because by nature, it is supposed to be read as natural as exhaling a breath.

Hi. March 13 here. and, as far as as the conspiracy theory on Pisceans go, i'm also a writer, prostituted writer nga lang.

Hi Everyone,

Isa po akong kawani ng GSIS sa isang branch nito sa Metro Manila. This is my humble effort to inform MTC members regarding GSIS concerns. I'll do my best to answer your queries ASAP, to the best of my knowledge.

Thanks.